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Imagine a world in which the illuminati have played a role in killing the leader of the free

world, wait just a minute, this isnt 2020 Im talking about November of1963. The John F.

Kennedy assassination tainted by the hands of the Illuminati. This is a major idea that many

people do not even consider as a possibility. This idea of supreme conspiracy would raise

eyebrows across the country, if not the world. This idea could evolve into a New York Times

best seller, a USA Today Top 100 book and most definitely could end up in Oprahs book club

list. It was the perfect time for an assassination because of all of the political and social strife that

occurred in the 1950s and 60s.

The initial driving force for my product was my interest in conspiracy theories. It just

seems like so many ideas, and concepts are hidden from the public eye and it really should make

you question what all is in fact kept from you. There are many high tier conspiracies in which

many agree something isnt right, yet many cannot agree on exactly what happened. In becoming

consumed with this idea the fact of the matter is someone other than Lee Harvey Oswald killed

the president that day. Certainly one could see this with basic witness testimonies all describing a

very different scene with very contrasting evidence of what occurred. How do you suppose that

three bullets can be fired from one gun in one mans hand and no one see a thing? There are just

so many details that dont align with what the government wants us to know. These details just

became embedded in my mind and when you go looking for answers there are not always

answers.

Well the main idea of this concept is we know the man who was responsible for pulling

the trigger and his motivation for doing so and how he feels after doing so. There are a few key

moments in his life which are touched upon, such as the death of his parents which leads to his

relocation to his ex military crazed uncles home. As well as his graduation from college and

Comment [LS1]: Commented by Leah

Smitley. You need headers, title, and name

format.

Comment [LS2]: I dont think have is

needed.

Comment [LS3]: I like the sentence, but

dont use conjunctions, and try to not write I

Comment [LS4]: I like this paragraph, Iknow what you are going to talk about

without you saying in my book..

Comment [LS5]: Try not to write you

much. Instead you could write kept for the

public, country, people

Comment [LS6]: I like how you made me

interested in the story, even though I

personally have no idea about the subject.

Thats good, just make it more formal by

taking out first person.

Comment [LS7]: Take out Well

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when he is offered a contract from a very high official who claims to be the head of the CIA

when in fact hes a main piece in the illuminati organization. All of this and his ultimate

resolution in his head before he is murdered by the illuminati to keep him quiet.

The main characters name is Michael Novak and he is the man who murders John F.

Kennedy. He plays a huge role in the novel and we see him develop from a child all of the way

to a cold blooded killer. Many factors play a huge role in his life and the way he develops along

with his caretaker being a lunatic. Michael is also approached by the head of the Illuminati,

David Ross. David is a charming, manipulative man who will crush anyone in his path. We learn

that David is an older man who is very physically fit for his age and that he has an endless supply

of power and money. Jerry Norwood is Michaels crazy uncle, enough said. He is the x factor

behind Michaels interest in the military and the reason any of the chaos is unleashed. Jerry ran

away from home to the local armory when he was a mere twelve years old. This man knew he

was destined for military greatness and was willing and ready to serve his country at the drop of

a dime.

Lastly I believe a subject so interesting and intriguing as this would have an impact on

many different audience groups. Ranging from the youth that love action movies today, to the

culture of adults that lived there young live back in the 1960s, this would capture an enormous

amount of attention. The premise behind this idea has never been used and I believe with the

growing interest in Illuminati affairs now, the work would be an instant success. As well as the

gigantic amount of people who are interested and still in doubt about the details of John F.

Kennedys death. Although the movie would indeed need to have a more mature audience it

would not be off of the wall violent or disgusting, just the simple details and the automatic

circumstances surrounding the project would not be suitable for a young audience. Adults would

Comment [LS8]: Kind of confusing. Your

character dies?

Comment [LS9]: It could be more formal

without that.

Comment [LS10]: Reread. That doesnt

make sense.

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probably be our highest audience and many details in this project are aimed at an older

generation who love a good mystery and now have an opportunity to take a step back and look at

one of the oldest conspiracies and ask themselves what if? Older people love to read and this

magnificent idea would create uproar in the literary world. Just think it would outshine Tom

Clancys series of military novels and put your company on top. The technique ofobserving

minute details and putting them on paper would make for an intense, action packed, thrill ride

that would keep you on the edge of your seat all while simply reading. Comment [LS11]: Good paper. Is it a bookor movie? You said both. Try to get rid of as

many first person words. To add length you

could tell about the assignation in real life, to

give the reader a clear understanding or fact

and fiction. Overall, very good!