FMP EvaluationAlisha Harrison

Production Process Evaluation

Research• My strengths of my research are that it helps to generate a few ideas and

to get a bigger understanding with what I am going to be creating/doing.• My research has helped my product by helping me generate ideas for my

product I didn't’t want to do to much research though as I didn't’t want to copy something that has already been created.

• The weaknesses of my research were finding where to look for information, I never know where to start, but once I get going I’m ok.

• To have improved my final product I could have done some more research maybe looked in different places, e.g books

• The affect this could have had on my product is that it could have come out better than it has done with more ideas and inspirations in order to create a better final product.

Planning• The strengths of my planning were I knew what I wanted my final product to

turn out like so once I new that I could then get some ideas down which would have helped me in order to generate that idea.

• Secondly its helped because I had ideas for my final product as I knew what my plans looked like so I could just move stuff around and change fonts and things.

• My planning has defiantly helped my product a lot by having faint ideas on what I wanted to final outcome to be.

• The weaknesses of my planning are that when I’m planning I’m trying not to do what I want my final outcome to be m trying to go back steps and not create my final product.

• What I could have done better to improve my product is maybe do more planning.

• The effect that this could have had on my product is it would have had a better outcome.

Time Management• I managed the time exceedingly well for this product.• I completed my product before the time limit which I am very impressed

that I have managed it.• If I did have more time I could of maybe spent more time on my planning

but don’t think I needed too because I have finished with a bit of time still left.

Target Audience Appeal• My target audience was planned for mostly females who are teens and

older maybe about 13-29 as I know people that age like celebrities.• My product is defiantly for mostly females has its pink and girly.

Technical Qualities

My magazine is similar to the one on the right because its about celebrities and had a big heading on the front with a big image of a female celebrity on the front so does mine it also has at the side some more pictures of people with text so does mine the only difference is the layout is slightly different and the wording but other than that I say they are similar

Aesthetic Qualities

In my opinion I think my work looks good its creative its my idea I haven't seen this been done before.

The strengths I have had with doing this are putting it together knowing how to put the pictures and information onto the page

A weakness I have had is knowing what sort of information I wanted

To improve this I would take more time and not try and get it done as soon as possible I would take it steady do more research in order to make my product better

What I would improve is maybe setting it out differently and appeal it to a wider audience

What I like about my product is that for the audience range I have chosen it matches to what they would want to see it’s girly and has celebrities on it

Audience Appeal

My target audience was beylonge’s people who are in education and live with their family and that are mostly females

The specific bits of content that appeal to my target audience would be the colour paint splodged background because its girly and also the text font it looks fun

Peer Feedback

Feedback 1

• What did you like about the product?• I like the use of colourful backgrounds and pictures, it

makes it stand out.• The layout of the magazine cover and page spread

makes it look like there is loads of detail• What improvements could have been made to the

product?• The pictures on the page spread would of looked better

with an outline or boarder so they stand out more from the colourful background.

Feedback 2

• What did you like about the product?– I like how colourful and eye-catching it is– I like the background because it fits the product well

and goes with the overall theme of the magazine

• What improvements could have been made to the product?– The pictures could use outlines to stand out more

Feedback 3

• What did you like about the product?– Good quality Images – Look realistic

• What improvements could have been made to the product?– Too much colour

Peer Feedback Summary

• What do you agree with from your peer feedback?

• That my pictures need an outline to make them stand out.

• I also agree that the pictures are good quality

• What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?– I disagree with there is too much colour.

Peer Feedback Summary

• Based on my feedback from my peers I would put outlines around all my images in order to make them stand out as the background is colourful.

• I would not use less colours as my product is aimed at females not males, I know that females like colour.