City of EmberEssay

Learning Intention

To revise essay writing strategies

To know and use the four elements of a paragraph in my writing

To understand what a contention is

To plan my essay

Success Criteria

I can say what I know about essay writing

I can include the TEEL framework in my paragraph writing (topic sentence, evidence/example, explanation, link)

I understand what a contention is

I can plan my essay

Key Vocabulary

T.E.E.L.paragraphcharacterssettingthemes – survival, greed, escaperelationships

GKR - Review Brainstorm:

What do you know about writing paragraphs/essays?

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What is a paragraph? A paragraph is a group of sentences that

convey an idea. Each sentence works together as part of a unit

to create an overall thought or impression. A paragraph is the smallest unit or cluster of

sentences in which one idea can be developed adequately.

Paragraphs can stand alone or function as part of an essay, but each paragraph covers only one main idea.

What is a topic sentence The most important sentence in your

paragraph is the topic sentence, which clearly states the subject of the whole paragraph.

The topic sentence is usually the first sentence of the paragraph because it gives an overview of the sentences to follow.

Supporting Sentences (Evidence and Explanation) The supporting sentences after the topic

sentence help to develop the main idea. These sentences give specific details

related to the topic sentence. In these sentences you explain why

topic is important.

Concluding Sentence(Link) A final or concluding sentence often

restates or summarises the main idea of the topic sentence.

How does the information in the paragraph link to your actual topic? 

What is a contention Use visuwords/snappy words/lexipedia

to find synonyms for ‘contention’

How can we define ‘contention’ in relation to our essay writing?

An expression of your opinion on a topic.

Essay TopicsWrite a 400 word essay discussing your chosen topic. Give examples such as characters, relationships, plot, costumes and setting to support your topic.

1. Compare Lina and Doon. How are they similar? How are they different? How does each impact the other?

Plan Essay

Writing the introduction

Introductory Paragraph Example

Topic sentence: Lina and Doon … are very similar to each other, and on the other hand, they are very different at the same time.

Evidence/Example: For example, they are both fearless and dedicated in their quest to get out of Ember. Doon is able to use his curiosity and technology skills to help with the … and Lina is able to …

Explanation: What I mean by this is that … they share some of the same qualities, values and personality traits. They are united in their quest to escape Ember for a better life and they work well together. Their differences also assists them to work towards this goal.

Linking sentence: I will discuss their similarities and differences to highlight how they compliment and impact on each other throughout the movie.

Complete Introduction Lina and Doon are very similar to each other, and

on the other hand, they are very different at the same time. For example, they are both fearless and dedicated in their quest to get out of Ember. Doon is able to use his curiosity and technology skills to help with the … and Lina is able to …What I mean by this is that they share some of the same qualities, values and personality traits. They are united in their quest to escape Ember for a better life and they work well together. Their differences also assists them to work towards this goal. I will discuss their similarities and differences to highlight how they compliment and impact on each other throughout the movie.

Your turn Topic sentence: Lina and Doon … Evidence/Example: For example, Explanation: What I mean by this is that

… Link: I will discuss …

List the four elements of a paragraph

Record the learning actions you used today to help you complete the introductory paragraph