Coursework analysis Milka Erko

What went well :D

Distribution logo, makes the whole sequence effective and realistic

A good close up shot, as it was a bit boring, the way the sense where changing, right through the sequence

Grade: Kayleigh got a grade B which is a level 3

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Even better if :/

The way the sense weren't changing like that, as it was kind of annoying. She should have done more close up shots to change to the next sense.

What went well :D

The black and white shot made the whole sequence more effective, and got the audience, a bit scared

Slow-motion kind of made the audience feel her pain, and made us feel sorry for her

Even better if :/If she used something then a plaster to cover her brose

If we heard her scram, when she was getting hit, to make the whole sequence more effective

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