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    101 Ways to Write It in Business EnglishCopyright by Andrew D. Miles

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    101 Ways to Write It in Business EnglishBy Andrew D. Miles

    Foreword

    101 Ways to Write It in Business English is for people who want aquick guide on what to write in different situations at work. Fiveexamples have been included for each function so readers can findthe phrase that best suits their needs.

    All in all, a choice of five hundred expressions to help you writebusiness English more effectively.

    About this Ebook

    Copyright by Andrew D. Miles, Barcelona, 2014.

    All rights reserved. Published exclusively for English for Businessstudents. No part of this publication may be sold or altered in anyform without written authorization from the author.

    You may reach Andrew D. Miles at [email protected],at + 34 934 230 229, or at www.englishforbusiness.es.

    English for Business students

    Download other ebooks atwww.barcelonaenglish.com/ebooks.

    100Ways to

    Say

    It in

    Business

    English

    130

    Mistakes

    Students Do

    (Oh Sorry!)

    Make

    500

    Common

    Verbs in

    English

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    Contents

    1. Start writing2. Introduce a summary3. Explain your purpose4. Present items in order5. Present assumptions

    6.

    Ask for information7. Ask about background8. Ask for clarification9. Ask for instructions10. Ask for advice

    11. Ask about responsibility12. Ask for permission13. Ask for help14.

    Ask about jobs15. Ask for an explanation

    16. Ask for solutions17. Ask about price18. Ask for a discount19. Offer a discount20. Propose payment terms

    21. Inquire about pay terms22. Request payment23. Correct misunderstanding24. Correct a mistake25. Emphasise

    26. Stop27. Change subject28. Agree29. Disagree30. Reassure

    31.

    Offer compromise32. Rephrase33. Introduce good news34. Introduce bad news35. Express condolence

    36. Reply to condolence37. Complain38. Express something sure39.

    Express something impossible40. Write further info

    41. Be specific42. Describe projects43. Describe fluctuation44. Describe stability45. Describe benefits

    46. Describe a chart47. Describe a company chart48. Describe characteristics49. Describe parts50. Describe how it is made

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    51. Describe content52. Describe causes53. Describe consequences54. Convince for55. Convince against

    56.

    Sell yourself57. Explore options58. Express an opinion59. Comment on an opinion60. Challenge an opinion

    61. Suggest62. Speculate

    63.

    Describe hypothesis64. Express interest65. Express lack of interest

    66. Support67. Deny support68. Set delivery times69. Apply for a job

    70.

    Accept a job offer

    71. Reject a job offer72. Acknowledge CV reception73. Refer to previous email74. Thank after an invitation75. Thank for a gift

    76. Thank for support77. Offer help78. Offer advice79. Borrow80. Reply evasively

    81.

    Invite82. Apologise83. Prohibit84. Reprimand85. Book

    86. Confirm87. Place an order

    88.

    Write on behalf of89. Attach90. Waive responsibility

    91. Accept responsibility92. Notify93. Welcome94. Request

    95.

    Give information

    96. Insist97. Express confidentiality98. Acknowledge receipt99. Remind someone100. English is not so good101. Finish

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    Mr & Mr.

    We follow theBritish

    spelling (Mr,Ms, Ltd) butthe Americanway is also

    correct (Mr.,Ms. Ltd. .

    1. Start writing

    To begin withTo begin with, we will review HXVs performanceso far.

    Lets start byLets start by analysing some figures. We will revise the wholebalance sheet at the end of this review.

    First of allFirst of all, Ill address the situation we faced last month. Then wewill go over lessons learnt.

    We will describeWe will describe the problem in the first lines of thisreport.

    Why am I writing?Why am I writing this note? To save you time andmoney, so please read it carefully.

    2.

    Introduce a summary

    BrieflyTo put it briefly, Mr Stevens messed the whole business.

    In a few wordsIn a few words, no one has claimed compensation yet though we aretechnically liable for damages.

    In a nutshell

    In a nutshell, the Africa operation has not turned out in the way weexpected.

    Lets start with a synopsisLets start with a synopsis.It will just take three lines. I shall thendevelop my thesis in chapters two and three.

    Ill outlineIll outline the issue in the paragraph below.

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    3. Explain your purpose

    The reason

    The reason I am writing is to try a rapprochement with yourattorney, who seems adamant to bring us to court.

    Our aimOur aim is to rationalise manufacturing with the help of this manual.Please make twenty copies and distribute them to our factories.

    Id likeyou to understandIdlike you to understand from this report is that our firm is sound.

    My objectiveMy last emails objective was to solve every misunderstanding, so Iam open to any comment you might have.

    We intendWe intend, by means of this document, to prove that we are not guilty.

    4. Present items in order

    First, second, to end

    First, we will read about costs; second, well see which expensesshould be trimmed. We will end by going over this years budget.

    To start with, then, to wind upWe visited every factory in the region to start with. Then, we pickedthe twelve most relevant industries. We wound up by interviewingten CEOs and writing this review.

    Initially, next, finallyWe initially plan to report on farming in Scotland; the next step willbe to write on cereal and finally provide figures for rye.

    In first place, following from that, to top things upIn first place, you never asked for permission; following on fromthat, you entered our premises illegally. To top things up, youdamaged three computers.

    We shall begin by, after, lastlyWe shall begin this article by defining economics. After that, we willstudy Samuelsons views on demand and supply. Lastly, studentswill have to write a digest.

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    5. Present assumptions

    We expect

    We expect next year to develop better than this year, mainly due tothe influx of immigrant workers.

    We anticipateAs I told you in my last email, we anticipate no further problemswith delivery.

    We presumeWe presume company law will remain the same if the governmentdoesnt give in to lobbyist pressure.

    We look ahead toWe look ahead to turmoil in the Middle East, as you can read in thenext chapter.

    If all turns out as plannedIf all turns out as planned, the assumptions of this report willbecome a reality.

    6.

    Ask for information

    Could you please send?Could you please send me all the postings for last month?

    Would you mind forwarding?Would you mind forwarding the information on the C&R case?

    I wonder if you could let us haveI wonder if you could let us have the TDX drawings. We will returnthem ASAP.

    What do you know about?What do you know about Peters background?Have you checked hisLinkedIn profile?

    We are interestedWe are interested in architecture. Do you have any records on theLambeth Square project?

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    7. Ask about background

    Could you enlarge on your experience?

    Could you enlarge on your experience on solar panel installation?

    Id like to know about your backgroundId like to know more about your background in industrial design.Can you forward a draft of anything you drew up lately?

    Would you mind detailing your work history?Would you mind detailing your work history a bit further? Yourrsum is rather succinct and we cant tell what your responsibilitieswere in your latest jobs.

    Id like to read about your educationId like to read more about your education. For instance, why didyou choose Cornell?

    Can you mention your achievements?Can you mention some of your achievements at Riversoft? Just pena five-line summary.

    8. Ask for clarification

    What did you mean?What exactly did you mean when you tweeted that there will bechanges at the Bangalore plant?

    Can you rewrite it in plain English?Can you rewrite paragraph three in plain English? I got lost in allthat jargon.

    I didnt understandI didntquite understand that last email. Are you sure it was meantfor my eyes?

    Could you explain?Could you explain your idea in more detail? I dontget the picture.

    I can't appreciate the differenceI cantappreciate the difference between the FTD and the FTE.Please enlarge on that.

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    9. Ask for instructions

    Could you explain how to?

    Could you explain how to operate the nozzle without breaking thefilter?

    Please let us know the best wayPlease let us know the best way to start the engine in cold weather.

    Can you break down the process?Can you break down the process into steps we can all follow?

    Please send us detailed

    Please send us a detailed drawing, as we have been unable toassemble the kit.

    How toPlease write back with instructions on how to order only one book inyour series.

    10. Ask for advice

    What should I do?What should I do if they ask us for our EBITDA? Please write backwith your opinion and ask Bruce for his point of view.

    Would you recommend?Would you recommend moving the administration office to the newsite?

    Do you know?Do you know anything about advertising? Could you give the copy Iattach a quick read?

    Would you have any advice?Would you have any advice on how I can summarise all this in twoparagraphs?

    I need your counselI need your counsel. Do you prefer best valueor the best valueas a slogan?

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    11. Ask about responsibility

    I need to know who is in charge

    I need to know who is in charge of press relations. Please tweet meher name.

    Who runs?Who runs the Detroit office now that Stan has left? Has anyone beennamed already?

    Who is accountable for this?Who is accountable for this mistake? I need an explanation on mydesk tomorrow.

    Are we liable?Are we liable for damages? Please have the lawyer prepare adisclaimer.

    Under whose responsibility?Under whose responsibility was the test conducted? Write backtoday, please.

    12. Ask for permission

    Could I?Could I read your copy of the translation? Can I ask Gillian to sendit?

    Would it be all right?Would it be all right for us to drop by your office tomorrow?

    Would you mind?Would you mind if Doris included you as a speaker for theconference?

    We need your consentWe need your written consent to sell the shares. Could you write andsign it please?

    Would you authorise us?Would you authorise us to put you down as co-author of the article?It will be published in the college gazette.

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    13. Ask for help

    Could you help me?

    Could you help me translate my thesis into Italian? I cant do it onmy own.

    Would you mind helping me?Would you mind helping me edit the book? Its rather long and I onlyhave one week to finish it.

    I would be thankful if you could assist meAs I said in my last email, Id be thankful if you could assist me inGenoa.

    I wonder if you couldI wonder if you could read my novel The Man with the Red Tattooand send me your opinion.

    Could I ask you for a favour?Could I ask you for a favour? Doreen lost her Rolex and I know youtravel to Switzerland often.

    14.

    Ask about jobs

    What does he do?What does your brother do? I heard hes a dentist but Im not sure.

    What business are you in?What business are you in? The last time we wrote to each other youwere in online gaming.

    Whats your line of work?Whats your precise line of work? All I know is that youre anengineer.

    Whats your job?Whats your current job? Please send me a short description.

    Where do you work?Where do you work? If its still NASA we would be keen to receiveyour rsum.

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    15. Ask for an explanation

    Please explainPlease explain your position and send me a summary of yourreasons for refusing to sign the contract.

    How can you justify?How can you justify the delay in the whole process? I need a report.

    I cant understand whyI cant understand why you did not show up last night. Pleaseapologise to Arleen in writing.

    Whats the reason?What is the reason behind your change of policy? Please email mean explanation so we can analyse it.

    Why did you?Why did you tweet on Genes sleeping habits? Thatsa private issueand you have no right to do so.

    16. Ask for solutions

    What should we?What should we do now that the machine doesnt start?

    How can we work it out?How can we work it out? Please write back with your suggestions.

    I wonder how to solveI wonder how to solve the gas emission problem. Please reformulatethe fuel mix.

    I need the solutionI need the solution on my desk tomorrow morning even if you haveto work all night.

    How do we overcome?How do we overcome this crisis? You have until Wednesday topresent your thoughts.

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    17. Ask about price

    Please send your price list

    Please send your price list to my private email address.

    How much would it cost?How much would it cost to redo the whole circuit?

    What do you charge?What do you charge for a sixty-minute session? And for ninetyminutes?

    Could you remit your fees?

    Could you remit your fees to the purchasing department? Pleasesend them to the attention of Ms White.

    What would the rate be?What would the rate be if we leased twenty units?

    18. Ask for a discount

    What would the discount be?What would the discount be if we bought three hundred copies ofmodel T and two hundred of model H?

    Please give us your final quotePlease give us your final quote because we have to decide now andthere are several contenders.

    Send us your best pricePlease make sure you send us your best price; you know we arevalued customers.

    Well hire you if you lower your ratesWe are ready to hire you if you manage to lower your rates by threepercent.

    Has the reduction been applied?Has the reduction we agreed on been applied? I cant see it in yourinvoice.

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    We havechosen to usenumerals for

    percentages, suchas 10 percent.

    19. Offer a discount

    We have a special offer

    Im writing because we have a special offer for valued customerssuch as yourself, Ms Christy Roy.

    Wed like to present our new discountedWed like to present our new discounted line of printer cartridges. Please see our attached brochure.

    A special saleIm writing to inform you that tomorrow we will run a special powertool sale at our store.

    Theres a markdownTheres a markdown available for every product paid cash.Pleaseclick here for full details.

    We are offering a price cutWe are offering a price cut to customers who order at least onethousand units.

    20. Propose payment terms

    We propose the following payment scheduleWe propose the following payment schedule: 10percent upfront; 50 percent on delivery and 40

    percent thirty days hence.

    We normally get paidWe normally get paid cash though we can make an exception in yourcase.

    We expect payment withinWe expect payment within ninety days of the invoice date. We trustyou will find this period acceptable.

    Our standard payment terms are as followsOur standard payment terms are as follows: 50 percent when theorder is accepted and 50 percent on reception of the goods.

    Our customers usually settleOur customers usually settle their accounts once a month.

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    We haveopted to spell

    out numbers thatare written withone word (eight,ten, forty, sixty,million) and use

    numerals fortwo-word

    figures, such

    as 21 or1273.

    21. Inquire about payment terms

    What are your payment conditions?

    What are your standard payment conditions for new buyers?

    Please specify payment termsPlease specify payment terms. Ill be waiting for your email.

    We normally pay byWe normally pay by cheque. Is that convenient for you?

    Would a letter of credit be all right?Would a letter of credit be all right? Its the best method

    for foreign suppliers.

    Can we pay in instalments?Can we pay in instalments? We would need a least ayear.

    22. Request payment

    Please confirm payment date

    Please confirm payment date. It should have beenyesterday as per our records.

    According to our booksAccording to our books, you still owe us 4,578.83 fromthe interpretation service we provided three months ago.

    Your statement is still outstandingMay we remind you that your statement is still outstanding? Couldyou please confirm when you are planning to settle?

    Will you balance your account promptly?Will you kindly balance your account promptly? You are alreadyseven days behind the due date and we havent collected any of ourinvoices yet.

    We are puzzled to have had no remittance from youWe are puzzled to have had no remittance from you. Could youplease confirm whether you have already sent the cheque?

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    25. Emphasise

    I want to highlight

    I want to highlight point three of my story. Thats when Fenellaarrived and trouble started.

    Id like to emphasise onId like to emphasise on the fact that those figures were neveraudited, as youll read laterin my attachment.

    It is significantNorahs attitude is highly significant. She not only wrote this letterbut contacted our chairperson as well.

    This becomes vitalFDA approval before the summer becomes vital if we want to avoidcash flow restrictions.

    Lets pay attention toLets payattention to what we know about and relegate the rest tolater reports.

    26. Stop

    We have to stopRegrettably, we have to stop. Funding is scarce and weve run out ofmoney.

    The project will be discontinuedThe Yellow River project will be discontinued though we dont knowwhy. Ill keep you postedon WhatsApp.

    Weve reached a standstillThings are so bad weve reached a standstill and wont continue untilthe unions and the company come to an agreement.

    Its overUnfortunately, the process is over. We were denied permission bythe town council. See their ruling attached.

    We must haltWe must halt negotiations with the Vietnamese. As you can see in

    the mail below, our CEO will conduct them herself.

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    27. Change subject

    On quite another matter

    On quite another matter, can you send me three boxes of drywallscrews?

    Could we now deal with?I know we havent finished with the Rondon affair. However, couldwe now deal with the Gant problem and leave Rondon on the sidefor a while?

    By the wayBy the way, our handbag division is again short of leather. Can you

    send me that rawhide suppliers details?

    To bring up something elseTo bring up something else, please have a look at the model Ienclose. Send me an email with your opinion when you have minute.

    Theres another issueTheres another issue we have to deal with losses in the chemistryarea. Please write a memo and copy every board member.

    28.

    Agree

    ExcellentExcellent news. Once we have all signatures we will proceed with theprogramme I attach.

    We share your opinionWe share your opinion so please mail everyone copies of thesummary you sent me.

    I agreeAs mentioned in my previous letter, I agree with all the clauses inthe contract. We are ready to sign whenever you are.

    Of courseOf course you can go ahead. Just copy me on everything you write.

    We coincideWe coincide with what you stated in your article and fully back yourvision on the way the film should be shot.

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    29. Disagree

    Ive got another

    Ive got another point of view.Martins could remain with us if wegave him another job.

    I wouldn't do thatIm writing to tell you I wouldnt do thatif I were you. Why dont yousend Doreen a get-well card instead of an email?

    I'm afraid I cant see itthat wayIm afraid I cant see it that way. Arabian customers are different, soyou might want to change the wording of the ad youve enclosed.

    Don't get me wrongDont get me wrong but your rough copy does not address the issueswe had mentioned. Please draft it again.

    Im not so keenIm not so keen on the way youve written the thesis. Why dont youinclude more examples?

    30. Reassure

    Theres no cause for concernIm writing to let you know that there is no cause for concern . Ourservers are 100 percent safe and have never been hacked.

    Let me assure youLet me assure you by this means that Lorraine will be well takencare of at our facilities.

    You can be confident

    You can be confident that we will solve your problem. All our teamare working on the issue and we will have a solution before the dayis over.

    There is no doubtAs Andrea wrote in her report, there is no doubt that the Gibsoninvestment is perfectly sound.

    Nothing can go wrongIm sending you this message to say that nothing can go wrong, Mr

    Murphy. Everything is under control!

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    We havewritten the

    names of books,magazines,

    newspapers andworks of art in

    italics.

    31. Offer compromise

    Only if he

    As I wrote before, were ready to go along only if Wren leads theproject.

    On condition that there areWell keep the factory open on conditionthat there are no morestrikes.

    Unless we can proveIm writing to tell you they wont let us import the equipmentunlesswe can prove we need it.

    Provided it isThe warranty covers all contingencies, provided the machine isserviced according to handbook instructions.

    We will accept as long as youWe will accept as long as you return all deeds and the enclosedaffidavit signed today.

    32. Rephrase

    In other wordsAs you say you did not understand ourmessage, let me put it in other words: youhave been dismissed!

    What I meant isWhat I meant in my book Fortress Europeis that its very hard forforeigners to get working papers there.

    Ill express it differentlyIt seems that most of what I write is too difficult, so Ill try toexpress myself in plain English from now on.

    What I wanted to explainWhat I wanted to explain was that the auditors were misinformedand not that the figures were wrong.

    Write it overIll write it all overso its more easily understood.

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    33. Introduce good news

    I am delighted to inform you

    I am delighted to inform you that you have won the first prize. Pleasecall our toll free number for instructions on collecting the cash.

    You will be pleased to readYou will be pleased to read that Claravision is to become our newadvertising agency.

    Its a pleasureto announceIts a pleasure to announce that you have been nominated for thefinal round. Please fill out the accompanying form and mail it back.

    I have excellent newsI have excellent news. Hopper has accepted our proposal! Theirofficial confirmation is only a matter of time.

    Shell be elatedwhen she receivesThanks for letting me know by email. Britney will be elated when shereceives the admission letter.

    34.

    Introduce bad news

    We regret to inform you thatWe regret to inform you that your programme has beendiscontinued. Please return all tools to our head office

    I am sorry but I have to let you knowI am sorry but I have to let you know that we will not participate in thebidding process, so your services as a translator are no longer required.

    I'm afraid it wont be possibleIm afraid it wont be possible for us to finance your venture.Pleaseread on for the reasons.

    Unfortunately, we are not allowedUnfortunately, we are not allowed to take on such high risk atpresent. However, feel free to resubmit your proposal next year.

    After careful consideration, we have decidedAfter careful consideration, we have decided not to publish yournovel. Please find your copy enclosed.

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    35. Express condolence

    I am sorry about your loss

    I am extremely sorry about your loss. Oliver will be missed by all ofus.

    I am writing to extend my sympathyI am writing to extend my sympathy to you and to your family inthis moment of grief.

    We were sad to learnWe were sad to learn that Mrs Finn passed away. Is there anythingwe can do to help?

    I would like to express my bereavementI would like to express my bereavement for the loss of such a valuedperson. A donation has been arranged in lieu of flowers, as he hadrequested.

    Our condolenceWe would like to express our condolence over the passing of such anesteemed member of your team. Could you confirm when theservice will be held?

    36. Reply to condolence

    Thanks for your noteThanks for your kind note, Eleanor.

    Thanks for your sympathyThanks for your sympathy. It was very much appreciated.

    Thanks for your supportI am writing to thank you for your support in these tryingcircumstances.

    Thank you for comingJust a short note to thank you for coming to Nevillesfuneral.

    Express our gratitudeOur family would like to express our gratitude for your kind words,which were read aloud during the memorial ceremony.

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    37. Complain

    I would like to file a complaint

    Imwriting because I would like to file a complaint with your shopmanager.

    My boss is not satisfiedMy boss is not at all satisfied with your answer and shall pursue thematter until it is settled.

    We deserve better serviceWe deserve better service from your store and not just an emailfrom your customer attentions officer.

    I do object to your policyI do object to your thirty-day return policy. Please find the Virgin inMoonlightstatuette attached. I expect a refund on my credit card.

    I was disappointed to learnI was disappointed to learn that G&H no longer offer a hotline soplease instruct all departments to refrain from shopping at thatstore.

    38.

    Express something sure

    They will surely increasePrices will surely increase if we do as Natalie suggests in her blog.

    They will definitely moveTo start this newsletter, Id like to mention that Operations willdefinitely move to Delaware early next month.

    It will unquestionably be taken overIm writing to confirm that Dynacore will unquestionably be takenover by Riversoft.

    They will doubtlessly finishThe contractors will doubtlessly finish the warehouse this November,as you can see in the building schedule attached.

    It is certain thatThe Wall Street Journal has stated it is certain that Claravision willlower their turnover the next quarter.

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    39. Express something impossible

    It will be impossible

    Im sending you this message to tell you it will be impossible for meto arrive on time. My plane is stranded in Vancouver.

    The project is undoableThis project is just undoable. Who drew the plans enclosed? Theyrewrong from beginning to end.

    It is out of the questionIm afraid a refund is out of the question; you have tried to return apair of skis that have already been used.

    The goals are unreachableThe goals Rachel set are unreachable. Please see my revised figuresat the bottom of this email.

    It will remain unattainableAs Mr Deming always said, total quality will remain unattainablewithout a well-trained workforce.

    40. Write further information

    In additionIn addition, Idlike to mention that our Saudi Arabia division has hadto fold due to minimal sales.

    BesidesBesides being our companys CEO, Abdul Holder also occupies aposition at Riversofts Board of Directors.

    As wellCorn, as well as wheat, is produced in Brazil. Refer to the chart onpage two for a state-by-state breakdown.

    FurthermoreYou cant go wrong if you invest in Dynacore; furthermore, we areexpecting a bull market in technology companies.

    MoreoverThey are facing logistic problems. Moreover, I can confirm that they

    have a backlog of at least three thousand units.

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    41. Be specific

    Be specific

    Can you be more specific in your answers? Please write back with allthe data and leave nothing on the side.

    Get to the pointAfter my introduction, Ill get to the point of this article. Why ispostpartum depression more prevalent in developed countries?

    IndividualiseCould you individualise? I dont know who you are writing about andcant make a decision without a name.

    ItemiseBelow youll find every product itemised by category and price.

    Send us the particularsCan you please send us the particulars? It is hard to prepare apresentation without knowing the facts.

    42. Describe projects

    We are working onWere now working on the new application, which you can downloadby clicking here.

    We have started the process ofIm writing to confirm we have already started the process ofdesigning another prototype.

    The projects under developmentThe projects under development are secret so I cannot send you anyinformation on them.

    We are involved inWe are already fully involved in phase B. Phase A was successful, asyou must have read in Phoebes circular.

    We are still busy withWe are still busy with installing the whole system so, regrettably, Ihave no time to send you a full report.

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    43. Describe fluctuation

    They fluctuate

    Stock prices fluctuated throughout the session until traders came togrips with the news.

    It is unstableThe system is unstable and it might crash any minute so weresending everyone this email. Please back up your important files andturn the computer off for an hour.

    They are irregularGrowth patterns are irregular in Europe and this report maintains

    that they concur with education levels.

    He behaves erraticallyCharlie behaves erratically. Hesexultant one day and sad the nextso we would recommend therapy for him.

    They varyFigures vary all the time. As my report highlights, its almostimpossible to draw a working model.

    44. Describe stability

    They are stablePrices will be stable for the whole season, at least according to theHuffington Post.

    They remain unchangedIm writing to remind you that nothing remains unchanged for verylong so we might face turbulences towards the end of this year.

    They stand steadyIf we are lucky, sales will stand steady next month though a slightreduction is also possible if the recession spills onto November.

    They stay constantIf the number of unemployed people stays constant, the governmentwill be forced to introduce labour law changes.

    Everything is the sameIn answer to your question, Id like to say that things are the sameas one year ago in Russia so we do not envisage an increase in

    activity.

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    45. Describe potential benefits

    If we do this we will get that

    If we increase R&D we will get better products at least if we are tobelieve what Rick Madden wrote in Develop Today Thrive Tomorrow.

    Potential benefits would includePotential benefits would include improved design and performance.

    The advantage would beThe advantage would be better products and increased market shareas a result.

    It promises to beThe book promises to be a success, at least in this critics view.

    Gains look likelyGains look likely both on fuel efficiency and on passenger safety.Please read the inset on the sidebar.

    46. Describe a chart

    TitleThe title must be written in upper case so please change the headingand send it back.

    RowNames should go on the top row and ages should be copied onto thebottom row.

    ColumnThe first column includes both products; the far column only refersto Model Nine.

    BoxThis box has been highlighted wrongly. Please do it over and thensend it to Nina for revision.

    IntersectionThe intersection of row three and column D show results in the firstscenario. The intersection of row three and column E depict theoutcome of the second hypothesis.

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    47. Describe a company chart

    John works for Jane

    As you can see in the attached diagram, John works for Jane, wholeads HR.

    Linda headsLinda heads our marketing team and reports to Janet. Janetmanages the sales department.

    Tess is in charge ofTess is in charge of media planning. She hasnt gotan assistant anddoes everything on her own.

    Patricia runsPatricia runs the online business, which is divided into two units:development and content.

    Hughs boss isHughs boss is called Howard. Hes the IT manager.Please contacthim if you have any technical problem.

    48.

    Describe characteristics

    It is made of wood and aluminiumIt is made of wood and aluminium with enamel coating on the sideand silver inserts on top.

    It features several improvementsIt features several state-of-the-art improvements such as higher-speed broadband access and 5-gigabyte RAM memory.

    It comes withIt comes with cordless speakers and wireless access to internetradio.

    It measures ten feetIt measures ten feet in width, two in height and one in depth.

    It weighs close to a tonThe SUV weighs close to a ton though it is lighter than most othervehicles in the same category.

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    49. Describe parts

    The section is built in

    As mentioned in our catalogue, the lower section is built in copperthough both the lid and the bottom are made of bronze.

    All components are manufacturedAll components are manufactured in-house except for thetransistors. We buy those from Siemens.

    Spare parts are not includedSpare parts are not included in our price though we do advise you topurchase at least two dozen bobbins and keep them in stock.

    Our ingredients areOur ingredients are secret but our boss has allowed me to enclose asample of our sauce for you to try. I hope you like it!

    The pieceThe piece moves when the shaft turns. Please click here to watch avideo that explains the whole cycle.

    50. Describe how a product is made

    Its made by dippingPlease read the accompanying instructions carefully. The candy ismade by dipping the frozen toffee in chocolate for three seconds andthen drying it in the oven.

    The process starts and finishesThe process starts at bay A and finishes at bay C. Please see thegraph Ive attached.

    Its produced at our factoryIts mass produced at our factory in Cali.

    We construct the frameAs you can see in the attached video, first we construct the frame.Then we build around it.

    We assemble the piecesHere we only assemble the pieces manufactured in Saigon thoughsome special kits are engineered in Beijing and delivered directly

    from there.

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    51. Describe content

    Include a

    Why dont you take more advantage of your website and include asurvey to check worker satisfaction?

    It contains all thatDoes the kit contain all thats neededto build the model plane? Ifthe answer is yes, please send me two sets.

    The plan comprisesThe plan comprises both current and future measures so study itcarefully before we make it public.

    We will incorporateWe will incorporate the designs attached to our catalogue nextmonth. Please check them.

    It featuresThe model features ABS, GPS, power steering and electric windows.

    52. Describe causes

    It was caused by lack ofThe decrease in productivity (exhibit A) was caused by lack ofinnovation.

    It resulted fromThe fall in passengers resulted from a misguided marketing policyand misuse of promotion tools.

    They arise due toI will argue in this dissertation that water shortages arise not due toglobal warming but due to wrongful use.

    It was the logical conclusion ofHer success was the logical conclusion of hard work, at least fromthis biographers standpoint.

    It was brought about byTheir fall was brought about by a chain of mistakes. Consult StewartBells TheManagement Conundrum, Mississauga, Wiley, 2005.

    53. Describe consequences

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    Lead toThe rise in sales led to increased R&D, which again led to highersales. See chart F.

    It implies thatHer late arrivals imply that shes not happy with her job, so pleasestart looking for a substitute.

    Result inOur failure resulted in the loss of the contract. Im sending th iscircular to inform everyone that our board are extremely dissatisfied.

    Mean that

    Rachels decision to fire David meansthat I have to work harder, soIm writing to request a raise.

    It entails thatLengthening the lunch hour would entail hiring at least one moreworker, so inform the staff that we will not go forward with the plan.

    54. Convince for

    Im convincedthis is the best wayIm convinced this is the best way to do it so please follow theinstructions Ive detailed below.

    I assure you it willI assure you our machine will work in every type of weather so theconditions you describe comply with our parameters.

    There is no doubt that ours is the bestThere is no doubt that ours is the best candidacy, so we can onlyexpect a positive outcome.

    You have my personal guaranteeYou have my personal guarantee that we will eliminate everyreference to your person from our website. Please keep this email asproof of our goodwill.

    Im writingto reassure youIm writing to reassure you that all the operation has been revised.Your satellite will reach low-earth orbit in perfect conditions.

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    55. Convince against

    We are certain she will not succeed

    We are certain she will not succeed and we should not back her. Infact, we might still be in time to convince her so if you have aminute write something on her Facebook page.

    Its not a good ideatoIts never a good idea to go against the tide. Therefore, Im copyingeveryone in this message to show my disapproval.

    I am againstI am against discrimination so Id be more than pleased if you

    withdrew that sexist poster our advertising department designed.

    Theres no guaranteeit will workTheres never any guarantee thatany business will work, let aloneone based on the assumption that buyers are not intelligent enoughto distinguish good from bad quality.

    I wouldnt enter intoI wouldnt enter into a partnership with Inverness Investments Ltd;they have a record of unlawfully withholding their clients profits.

    56.

    Sell yourself

    I performI perform well under pressure, as can be attested by my reactionswhen we had an IRS inspection last summer.

    I can ad valueI believe I can add value to your team. I have not only worked inTeheran but speak more than passable Persian.

    My experience should allow me toMy experience should allow me to run the China division on my own.I know that Fred Cheng has been with us for twenty years but Ithink it is ripe time for a handover.

    I metI met all my objectives in my last job, as you can see in my rsum.

    My backgroundMy background includes work in environmental biology though I am

    also specialised in water decontamination.

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    57. Explore options

    Let's look atLets look at alternativeA. Youll find its implications in the flow chartbelow.

    Why dont we consider?Why dont we consider splitting the Europe division into EuropeanUnion members and non-members?

    How about?How about this last proposition? I would like you to review it, soplease read all the literature and send me your opinion.

    We have several choicesWe have several choices. Managua, Shanghai or Hanoi. Pleasesurvey every location.

    We could eitherWe could either invest in gold or silver though neither is the haventhey used to be due to current volatility.

    58. Express an opinion

    We considerWe consider Tonga to be a safe destination for our cruisers and wewill do our utmost to include your port the next season.

    It is our viewIt is our view that only increased research can bring success to thislaboratory. Therefore, find our five-year R&D plan attached.

    My opinion is

    My opinion is clear and I will not change it even if you send me athousand messages.

    I am convincedI am convinced of Dynacores trustworthiness and I am ready to signany document to back that.

    We are certain thatAs our brochure says, we are certain that the new variety of maizewill yield better crops.

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    59. Comment on an opinion

    Regarding what you mention

    Regarding what you mention in your blog, I want to add we willnever allow discrimination.

    On reading your wordsOn reading your words, I recalled what our Chairman used to writein his Christmas circular.

    Your point of viewYour point of view is only shared by your team. Our opinion isdifferent. Please click here to see why.

    Your idea lacksYour idea lacks accuracy. We need exact figures so work everythingout again and dont sent it backuntil youve double-checked all data.

    Id like to raise a pointId like to raise a point on your conclusions. You presume that theprice of gas will invariably follow the price of oil. It is not always so.

    60. Challenge an opinion

    Could you send me justification?I do not understand what you mean when you write that costs haveincreased beyond expectations. Can you send a written justification?

    I dont think youve taken it into accountI dont think youve taken VAT into account. Could you draw anotherbudget and include all taxes?

    I object toI must object to point three, where you specify that disputes wouldbe resolved by a committee of experts named by your company.

    Im afraid I will disputeIm afraid Ill have to dispute your findings. Your study was based ona random selection of eighteen subjects but that sample is not largeenough to draw conclusions.

    Id like to questionId like to question Rosemarys quote, which youve attached. Is it

    100 percent consistent with our pricing policy?

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    61. Suggest

    I guess you might

    I guess you might be better off without the hassle involved in moving.Why dont you reform your office instead of buying a new one?

    Why dont we try?Why dont we try to find another supplier? Please instruct Jerome toprepare a list of prospective providers.

    Maybe we shouldMaybe we should cut on R&D spending. If you watch the videoattached you will see how some of our researchers waste time on

    impossible projects.

    We couldattemptWe could attempt to reach Loretta Dawson. Has anyone got her onFacebook?

    How about only?How about only translating a summary? I have a budget for thewhole book here and it exceeds two thousand pounds, which I findpreposterous.

    62.

    Speculate

    What if?What if water levels rose by three feet before the end of thecentury? Please send me a detailed analysis.

    I wonder whyI wonder why she forwarded me this email (see it copied below).Can you make any sense of her words?

    Its a conjectureIts only a conjecture, but how would Mr Hobbs react if he ever cameacross this file?

    Suppose weSuppose we changed Y for Z in the graph. Wouldnt results matchour hypothesis?

    Its based on the assumptionThe theory presented is based on Max Webers assumption that

    humans mostly behave rationally.

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    63. Describe hypothetical scenarios

    If we choose

    If we choose option A we could face problems with the workforce sowe would better look for another solution.

    If you selectIm writing to warn you that if you select the second alternativemany people will want to leave our company.

    By pickingBy picking our harvester youll assure a supply of promptly deliveredspare parts.

    If we go withIf we go forward with Joels proposal we might face trouble later on.Please read Shamirsprojections on this PDF document.

    Opting for an alternativeOpting for any of the alternatives would be much better than doingnothing, so all our team urge you to make a fast decision.

    64. Express interest

    That is an interesting notionThe notion you mention in paragraph three whereby you linkassociative learning to success in businessis very interesting.

    Its worth looking intoYour solution is worth looking into so we will name a committee tostudy it. Could you please suggest who might become members?

    Im attracted to the wayIm attracted to the way she blends colours (see the picture Iveenclosed) so we might consider her for an exhibition at our gallery.

    Its appealingThe idea is appealing, at least on first read. Can you expand on it?

    It has drawn my attentionYour plan has certainly drawn the boards attention. Now we have towait for them to make a decision.

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    65. Express lack of interest

    I dont mind either way

    I dont mind either way. Choose whichever design you want andsend Rashida a WhatsApp with your decision.

    I am not concernedI am not concerned about the outcome of the polls because Icouldnt care less about politics.

    Itsthe same to meBoth options are the same to me. Deliver the samples to Jill andshell writeback with her choice.

    Thats none of my businessThats none of my business. Logistics is your area so please dontask me about transport again.

    It makes no differenceMy office wall colours make no difference to me. I just want the jobdone in one day.

    66. Support

    I agreeI agree with Damian. Lets close the deal ASAP, so forward thedocuments to Enid and Geraldine immediately.

    I recommendIm writing to recommend we follow option seven, which seems lesstraumatic on employees.

    Im all for itIm all for your plan, Smithers. Please copy the staff on your reply sothey know Im one hundred per cent behind you.

    We have the same opinionWe have the same opinion as Milton Friedman, who wrote, TheGreat Depression was produced by government mismanagementrather than by any inherent instability of the private economy.

    I share your point of viewI do share your point of view. Hence, lets write a joint memo to the

    board of directors.

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    Timeis presented

    in the twelve-hour clock,

    as is usual inEnglish

    speaking

    countries. Amand pm havetaken thefollowing

    format: 7.00am and 7.00pm or 7 pmand 7 pm.

    67. Deny support

    I would eliminate

    I would eliminate points nine and ten. Theyre unnecessary. Pleaserewrite the instructions and send them back to me.

    We should rejectWe should reject Wandas ridiculous scheme to gain market share. Achild would have drawn a better plan.

    We must rule outIm replying to your email to let you know that we must rule outVictors idea. We have neither the money nor the time.

    We ought to discardWe ought to discard buying Dynacore, as I told you byWhatsApp yesterday. The board wont approve it.

    Lets refuseLets refuse any option that implies breaking ourcorporation into pieces, whether its spinning off thesugar cane division or divesting our properties in Brazil.

    68.

    Set delivery times

    Itll be there inThe lorry will be there at 7.00 pm, weather permitting.

    Youll receive it onYoull receive it on Tuesday afternoon unless the strikecontinues. If it does, we unfortunately cannot give you adate.

    Our earliest deliveryId like to confirm that our earliest delivery date for the drill is lateOctober.

    You can expect itIm writing to let you know that you can expect it within a week.

    It will leaveThe parcel will leave our printerstoday so you should get ittomorrow.

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    69. Apply for a job

    Im writing to apply

    Im writing to apply for the teaching job advertised in LinkedIn lastMonday.

    I would be interested in working atI would be interested in working at your Asuncin office. I can speakSpanish and have lived in South America for several years.

    Im contacting you because Id like to be consideredIm contacting you because Id like to be considered for a job atRiversoft Ltd.

    I would be availableIm sending you this email to let you know that I would be availablefor any post immediately.

    Im submitting this applicationIm submitting this application because I have been told yourdepartment store is planning to open a branch at our city.

    70. Accept a job offer

    Thank you for taking me onThank you for having decided to take me on. I wont disappoint you.

    I would like to confirmI would like to confirm that I have received your job offer and that Iwill be delighted to join GG Banksmarketing department at yourearliest convenience.

    I am pleased Ive been hiredI am very pleased Ivebeen hired by Riversoft. Please find thedetails you requested copied underneath my signature.

    Im writing to acceptyour offerIm writing to formally accept your offer. Iunderstand that I will beworking as an intern at your Pasadena facility.

    I was delighted to receive your messageI was delighted to receive your message saying that I have beenadmitted to your trainee programme.

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    71. Reject a job offer

    Im afraid Ill have to decline your offer

    Im afraid Illhave to decline your offer. Even though the position isvery interesting, the salary does not match my expectations.

    I must reject the jobI hate to write and tell you this but I must reject the job. Myhusband doesnt want to move to Tokyo.

    I refuse to workI am sorry but I absolutely refuse to work under the conditionsoutlined in the attached contract.

    I have to turn down your proposalI regret to, but I have to turn down your proposal. I cant workSaturdays because I have three young children.

    Could we leave it for later?Unfortunately, I cant take the job right now. Could we leave it forlater?

    72. Acknowledge CV reception

    Thanks for submitting your CVThanks for submitting your CV. We will look though it and contactyou if we feel your profile fits our company needs.

    Thanks for sending your rsumThanks for sending your rsum, which Ill forward to the humanresources department.

    We acknowledge receipt of your applicationWe acknowledge receipt of your application. Please call us afterWednesday to check whether you need to come to an interview.

    This is to confirm we have received your curriculum vitaeThis is to confirm we have received your curriculum vitae. We willget back to you once Professor Gant has had a chance to look at it.

    We appreciate your interest in working atWe appreciate your interest in working at Dynacore. Unfortunately,we are not hiring drivers at this moment but will keep your details in

    case we have an opening.

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    75. Thank for support

    Your encouragement means a lot

    Im sending you these lines to thank you for your email. Yourencouragement means a lot to me.

    How can I thank you?How can I ever thank you for backing me? Your missive made all thedifference and the committee finally accepted my plan.

    I am more than gratefulI am more than grateful for your letter of reference, which I receivedyesterday.

    Ill never be able to pay backIll never be able to pay you back for your support, which made a bigdifference to me. Please find a small gift enclosed.

    We really appreciateIm sending you this card to say that I really appreciate what you didfor us during the Doha conference. We would have never managedwithout your help.

    76. Thank for an invitation

    Thanks for your hospitalityThanks for your hospitality. You made us both feel at home.

    I enjoyedIm sending you this card to tell you I utterly enjoyed the party.Thanks a lot.

    It was wonderful

    It was wonderful to be at the product launch. Thank you for thinkingof me.

    What a pleasureWhat a pleasure it was to have dinner at your club. I am verygrateful and wish to extend my appreciation to your kind wife,Belinda.

    I lovedIm writing to tell you I loved seeing you all. Thank you for a

    delightful night.

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    77. Offer help

    I am writing to inquire if theres anything we can do

    I am writing to inquire if you feel theres anything we can do to helpPeter overcome his loss.

    Would you like some help?Would you like some help with the setup? I can catch and earlierplane so drop me a WhatsApp if you need me.

    If we can aid youJust a short note to tell you that if we can aid you in any way, wewill. You only need to ask.

    May I offer my assistance?May I offer my assistance? I do have experience in foreign trade soif you care to forward me a copy of the letter of credit Ill browsethrough it.

    We would be willingWe would be quite willing to drive into Bethesda to help the teamprepare for the meeting.

    78.

    Offer advice

    Do you want to know what I would do?Do you want to know what I would do? Nothing. I would just sit andwait.

    Would you like some advice?Would you like some advice? I have been to Russia several times sowrite back if you need anything.

    I wonder if I could make a suggestionIm writing because I wonder if I could make a suggestion. You mightwant Ben to accompany you. Hes a lawyer and a tough negotiator.

    Would you like me to write back with my views?Would you like me to write back with my views? I wont if you dontwant me to, but remember Im here to help if you need me.

    Can I be of assistance?Can I be of assistance? I do have experience in finance so you can

    send me the accounts before you meet Dean Sloan tomorrow.

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    79. Borrow

    Would you lend me?

    Would you lend me your caravan this summer? I would like to driveit on Route 66 from Chicago to Los Angeles.

    I wonder if I could borrowI wonder if I could borrow your theodolite tomorrow. We need tomeasure a plot.

    Do you mind if we use?Do you mind if we use your printer? Ours has no ink.

    Could we have access to?Could we have access to your intranet all day today?

    I would needI would need a laser pointer for the presentation. Could I have one?

    80. Reply evasively

    Its hard to decide right nowIts rather hard to decide on that right now.Give me some time andIll send you a messageat some point next month.

    Im afraidwe dont have enough informationIm afraid we do not have enough information to reply to yourenquiry. Ill email an answer if and when we do.

    We are in no position to comment on the matterUnfortunately, we are in no position to comment on the matter dueto personal data protection rules.

    Its of secondary importanceI believe the Taipei problem is of secondary importance. The actualproblem lies in Mumbai. Therefore, we will concentrate on solvingour India division difficulties until further notice.

    I dont have enough timeto deal with thatI dont think Ihave enough time to deal with that subject so dontexpect a reply from me. Why dont you ask Burrows?

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    81. Invite

    Would you like to?

    Would you like to visit the factory workshop? It would take aboutthirty minutes and we should be able to finish early enough for yourspeech.

    I am writing to ask if you are freeI am writing to ask if you are free on Monday. I know a fantasticrestaurant but we need to reserve at least one week in advance.

    I would like to invite you toI would like to invite you to our office the next time you visit Fife.

    Would you care to join?Would you care to join us for the New York Philharmonic OpeningNight? If you didnt bring your tuxedowe could have Mary get you arental one.

    We would be delightedWe would be delighted to receive you and your husband at ourweekend cottage.

    82. Apologise

    Im writing to say I amsorryIm writing to say I amsorry for the trouble caused. It wont happenagain.

    Please accept my apologiesPlease accept my sincere apologies. I wasnt paying attentionand Idid not realise Kevin was exiting the door with the forklift while Iwas reversing with the van.

    I didn't mean toThis email is to let you know that I am extremely sorry. I didntmean to call you a fool, Ms Garcia. I both admire and respect you.

    I regretI regret having sent you to Moldavia, Steve. However, someone hadto go. Please forward weekly updates so I know whats happening.

    I would like to apologiseIm sending you this letter because I would like to apologise for my

    firms lack of transparency.Please find our balance sheet attached.

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    83. Prohibit

    It is prohibited

    Im writing this email to remind everyone that smoking is prohibitedin the whole building.

    They should be bannedIt is this writers view that firearmsshould be banned in this county.

    It is forbiddenI would like to remind all our newsletter readers that it is forbiddenfor staff to discuss company matters outside the office.

    We are not allowedIm afraid we are not allowed to bring children into the lab. Pleaserefer to safety measure six in the manual.

    Regulations do not permitTo answer your question, regulations state that dogs are notpermitted at hospital premises, though guide dogs are allowed on aleash and muzzle.

    84. Reprimand

    Our company reproves your actionOur company reproves your actions during the recent strike and hasdecided to suspend you from work until a proper investigation isconducted.

    We are not satisfiedWe are not at all satisfied with your performance, Samuel. Pleaseread the survey attached and you will understand why.

    We must reprimandWe must reprimand unauthorised entry to the research lab if wewant technicians to obey restrictions.

    I am disappointedIm writing to say Iam disappointed at your behaviour. Youll beduly informed of the disciplinary measures.

    No one is pleasedNo one is pleased with the results and you are to blame. Read on soyou realise why you were utterly wrong in both assumption and

    execution.

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    Dateshave beenwritten in

    the following

    format: 1st

    June, 2016;

    1 June,2016 orJune 1,2016.

    85. Book

    Would you have that free?

    Would you have a meeting room free for next Friday? Please confirmif you do as otherwise wed have to look somewhere else.

    Id like to reserveId like to reserve booth thirty-seven this year, if its still available.Please let us know ASAP.

    Could you set aside?Could you set stand eleven aside for us? Ill wire the deposit today.

    We would needWe would need at least fifteen thousand feet of floor space plus aseparate building for offices.

    Im looking to bookIm looking to book the hall for our Annual General Meeting,which will take place on 1stand 2ndJune, 2016.

    86. Confirm

    I would like to confirmI would like to confirm your Friday 10.15 am appointmentwith Dr McCall. Please send me a message if you cantmake it at that time.

    We have verifiedWe have verified the source of the brief you sent us and it isreliable. Do you want us to proceed or do you prefer to wait untilthe scandal becomes public?

    It has been corroboratedThe information you refer to in your report has been corroborated. Itis true that the FDA are about to approve Squibbs new analgesic.

    I can assureI can assure you that this rumour is false. I dont care if you read itin HelloMagazine. Please find our official disclaimer attached.

    It is firmIf the order is firm we will need a deposit. Please contact Pearl Dort

    at the accounting office for our bank details.

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    87. Place an order

    Id like to place an order

    Id like to place an order for twenty condensers.

    Id like to buyId like to buy three tons of each metal if they can be delivered bynext week.

    Do you have any in stock?Do you have any linseed oil in stock? Please send me a message ifyou do.

    Im writing to confirm the purchaseIm writingto confirm the purchase of another tractor.

    Can you sell us?Can you sell us twenty dynamos and three rotors?

    88. Write on behalf of

    Im writing on behalf ofIm writing on behalf of Mary, who has asked me to let you knowthat everything has already been settled.

    Im contacting you in our boards nameIm contacting you in our boards nameto warn you that noisyactivities after 10.00 pm are not permitted at our condominium.

    She will representMs Hollander will represent our chairperson in the next summit soplease brush up on your French, as the meeting will be conducted inthat language.

    Im acting as a deputyIm acting as a deputy director while Mr Garson is away on sickleave. Hence, you will unfortunately have to wait until his return foran answer.

    Im standing in forIm standing in for Joan Hastings and will be conducting negotiationsfrom now on, so please contact me directly if you have any question.

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    89. Attach

    Please find attached

    Please find attached appendix B; appendix A has already beenremitted to Mr Burnett.

    We are sending herewithWe are sending herewith a draft for the amount mentioned in invoiceNo 765.

    Please find alongsidePlease find alongside this letter a sample of our latest calendar,which we can print on glossy or mate paper.

    Enclosed you will findEnclosed you will find the repaired necklace as well as the brokenbrooch.

    Im forwardingIm forwarding three copies of our summer catalogue so theyreavailable when you need them.

    90. Waive responsibility

    We are not responsibleOur company is in no way responsible for our employeesmisdemeanours during their private time.

    We cannot be held accountableWe cannot be held accountable for machine misuse, so we will notpay you any compensation.

    We accept no liabilityOur firm accepts no liability for the content of that email or for theconsequences of any actions taken on the basis of the informationtherein provided.

    We are not to blameWe are not to blame if you tried to assemble the kit without readingthe instructions.

    We do not admit culpabilityWe do not admit culpability in the matter you have written to us

    about, and shall contest any claim you file at court.

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    91. Accept responsibility

    We are responsible

    We are indeed responsible for what happens at our premises so youwill be contacted by our lawyer to discuss compensation.

    I am accountableI am accountable for my own acts so I will take full responsibility forwhat happened during the fight.

    We are to blameWe are to blame for any malfunction because our products carry fullguarantee and theres no indication that the enginewas mishandled.

    I acknowledge I was wrongI acknowledge I was wrong and I am ready to pay for my mistake.

    The team is guiltyThe whole team is guilty of overseeing signals that would have beenobvious even for an amateur. As such, we all feel obliged to hand inour notices and leave the laboratory.

    92. Notify

    I would like you to knowIm putting this in writing because Id like you to know that we willchange providers and Gus Ltd has been chosen as timber supplier.

    We want to notify youWe want to notify you that Celina Smith is our new Texasrepresentative, so all purchase orders will be handled by her.

    I have to inform you thatI have to inform you that your project has been rejected by thecontrol committee. Please find their rejection attached.

    Wed like to caution youWe'd like to caution our residents about the inherent dangers ofrunning computers without updated antivirus software.

    Its my duty to tell you thatIts my duty to tell you that we follow strict non-discriminationpolicies at our company.

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    93. Welcome

    Welcome to our company

    We would like to welcome you to our company. Please find our dresscode attached and read it before your first day here.

    It will be a pleasure to have youIt will be a pleasure to have you with us for the presentation. Pleasecome to see me directly when you arrive.

    Im glad you decidedIm glad you decided to accept our offer. We will be expecting youon Monday 23 September.

    Everyone at the office was delightedIm writing to tell you that everyone at the office was delighted toread youll be visiting us.

    Weve incorporatedThe first point in todays newsletter is that we have incorporated DidiMavuso, who will join our sales team as soon as she finishes hertraining period. Welcome Didi!

    94.

    Request

    Could you?Could you fetch some Cannon printer cartridges when you go toTesco? Ill send you another email to remind you on Friday.

    Would it be possible?Would it be possible for Mrs Stowe to come to our headquarters inMay instead of June?

    I would needI would need you to prepare a list of prospective clients by tomorrowmorning. Please email it once its ready.

    Would you mind?Would you mind helping Yun-seo in her first day at your office? Shesforeign and Im not sure her English is top-notch.

    Could you by any chance?Could you by any chance find out whether Mr Gills likes truffle? We

    are preparing the banquet menu and it would help us to know that.

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    95. Give information

    I'm writing to let you know that

    Im writing to let you know that all paperwork has already beenhanded in by every applicant.

    We are able to confirm thatWe are able to confirm that works will start in August, so pleaserefrain from travelling during or after that month.

    Please find the information enclosedPlease find the information you requested enclosed. There arebrochures, catalogues and a price list.

    Im sendingyou theIm sendingyou the figures you asked for. Please drop me a line ifyou need anything else.

    Just a note to sayJust a note to say that the office will be closed on 24 thDecember.

    96. Insist

    Im writing to insist onIm writing to insist on the matter we discussed yesterday and toreinstate my point of view: we should not sell the hotel division.

    Its the third timeIts the third time I contact youto complain about excessive noise inyour warehouse. If this does not stop immediately we will file areport with the police.

    Please excuse my persistence butPlease excuse my persistence but I have already written severaltimes and never got a reply.

    Im writing again becauseIm writing again because the matter has not been settled and noone at your office has given me a satisfactory answer.

    Its me once moreIts me once more. I will keep on writing until your register agrees toreassess my property, as I believe it has been given an excessive

    valuation by the cadastre office.

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    97. Express confidentiality

    Information will be treated confidentially

    Any information you supply will be treated confidentially and willnever be sold or given to a third party for any reason.

    Information is kept safelyBe assured that all private information is kept safely in our servers.

    Data is in the best possible handsThere is no doubt that your data is in the best possible hands. Wehave a very strict privacy policy.

    Information is treated with utmost careAll information is treated with utmost care at our facilities and willnot be disclosed to any other party.

    We comply with data protectionWe comply with Data Protection Act 1988 and with Data ProtectionDirective 95/46.

    98. Acknowledge receipt

    We acknowledge receipt ofWe hereby acknowledge receipt of form TX7 on 7thSeptember thisyear.

    We confirm reception ofWe are writing to confirm reception of your rsum. We will contactyou if we feel your profile meets our needs.

    It is already hereThe calendar you sent us via DHL is already here. Thank you verymuch.

    The parcel has arrivedThe parcel has arrived, though not in perfect conditions. One side ofthe box got wet and painting on that face has peeled off. Could youplease send us another one?

    We have receivedWe have received all documentation needed and shall now proceedto study every credential.

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    99. Remind

    Im writing to remind you

    Im writing to remind you of tomorrows conference, which will takeplace at the Palace Hotel.

    Dont forgetPlease dont forget to attach you CV when you write back to me.

    Do you remember?Do you remember that Cynthia is coming this afternoon? Pleasereply so I know youve read this message.

    Bear it in mindPlease bear the Fulton affair in mind when you speak to Gustomorrow. You can read the details by googling Fulton affair 2014.

    Take it into accountTake Jays warning into account and do upload the presentation atleast one hour before you are due to deliver it.

    100. Write that your English is not so good

    My English is not very goodIll try to write as clearlyas possible, though my English is not verygood.

    I cant write proper EnglishI cant write proper English, so please excuse my mistakes.

    My English is limitedMy English is a bit limited. Can you please explain what you meanwhen you write PCR biochemical technology?

    I can follow most of what youve writtenI can follow most of what youve written but have doubts onparagraph two.

    My level of English is elementaryMy level of English is elementary so you will surely find some errorsin my emails.

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    Wehaveused

    contractions(its, dont,

    weve, Id) inmost

    standard

    writingthough very

    formalEnglishrarelycarriesthem.

    101. Finish

    Id like to conclude

    Id like to conclude this evaluation by explaining the methodologyapplied and by thanking Dr Lewisham for his support.

    Let me endLet me end this message by reminding you that we are atthe top not only due to your outstanding work but due toMarks leadership as well.

    Finally

    Finally, as I already stated in my September blog entry,GG should have never approached Bert Ravenport for aninvestment.

    Before concludingBefore concluding, Id like to invite all readers to join our

    drive for a famine free world.

    I want to finishI want to finish my ebook with the words of J. R.R. Tolkien:It's the

    job that's never started as takes longest to finish.

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    Copyright by Andrew D. Miles, Barcelona, 2014.

    All rights reserved. Published exclusively for English for Businessstudents. No part of this publication may be sold or altered in anyform without written authorization from the author.

    You may reach Andrew D. Miles at [email protected],at + 34 934 230 229, or at www.englishforbusiness.es.

    English for Business students can download other books atwww.barcelonaenglish.com/ebooks.

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