1 Starters Descriptive

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The cars were all

moving slowly and

I was fed up of waiting. My back

was aching and I

just wanted to be

far away

I looked out of the

window. I saw a

man picking hisnose while his

wife looked on in

disgust. Radio 1

was jangling in the

background

I¶m mildly interested«

I¶m hooked«

I might keep on reading«

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The cars were all

moving slowly and I

was fed up of waiting.

My back was aching

and I just wanted to

be far away




I looked out of the

window. I saw a man

picking his nose whilehis wife looked on in

disgust. Radio 1 was

jangling in the

background



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There was a swathe

of colour around

the stadium. Lots

of loud voices couldbe heard and there

was a hush of

expectation as the

players emerged.

It started with a

roar. I could feel

the vibrations in mystomach. This was

it. The smell of

beer and hot dogs

fuelled my hunger

for the match


I¶m hooked«




Use of the senses..

There was a swathe

of colour around the

stadium. Lots of

loud voices could be

heard and there was

a hush of

expectation as theplayers emerged.



Use of the senses..

It started with a

roar. I could feel the

vibrations in mystomach. This was

it. The smell of beer

and hot dogs fuelled

my hunger for thematch



Vote for the best use of zoom-in detail

A group of students

were looking at the

video games and

laughing. The

security guardlooked as if hed

rather be

somewhere else.

The Bahamas

perhaps

All the people were

wondering about

like zombies. On

every face youcould see the marks

of boredom as they

walked down the

mall


I¶m hooked«




Use of zoom-in detail

A group of students

were looking at the

video games and

laughing. Thesecurity guard

looked as if hed

rather be

somewhere else.

The Bahamas

perhaps



Use of zoom-in detail

All the people were

wondering about like

zombies. On everyface you could see

the marks of

boredom as they

walked down the

mall



Vote for the best use of figurative language

Everyone was

smiling like

Cheshire cats. This

was heaven.

Rooster were aboutto take the stage.

The noise of the

amplifiers growled

like lions about to

take their prey

Noise bled through

the amplifiers. I

could feel the thud

of drums like an

extra heart-beat.The day had been

ripped open by the

hellish marriage of

string and vocals.

This was heaven!


I¶m hooked«




Use of figures of speech

Everyone was

smiling like Cheshire

cats. This was

heaven. Roosterwere about to take

the stage. The noise

of the amplifiers

growled like lions

about to take their

prey



Use of figures of speech

Noise bled throughthe amplifiers. I

could feel the thud

of drums like anextra heart-beat.

The day had been

ripped open by the

hellish marriage of

string and vocals.

This was heaven!

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