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Lecture 7:Lecture 7:The Plan and the Teams The Plan and the Teams
Professor Christopher Bradley
The Muppet Movie (1979) Screenplay by Jack Burns and Jerry Juhl
Previous LessonPrevious Lesson
• The climactic moment of your first act
• Moving into the second act
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Poltergeist (1982) Screenplay by Steven Spielberg, Michael Grais & Mark Victor
Based on a story by Steven Spielberg
In this LessonIn this Lesson• New World, New Rules
• The Formation of Teams
• Subplots
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Little Miss Sunshine (2006)Screenplay by Michael Arndt
The Plan and the TeamsThe Plan and the Teams
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The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring (2006)Screenplay by Fran Walsh & Philippa Boyens & Peter Jackson
Based on the novel by J.R.R. Tolkien
Lesson 4: Part I
ExamplesExamples• In The Muppet Movie, Kermit leaves the
swamp on a bicycle for his journey to Hollywood.
• He assembles a team including Fozzie Bear, Rolf the Dog, Gonzo and
Miss Piggy. (Subplots)• Each contributes to the team. • Each adds to his resolve to succeed.• Each makes succeeding more of a challenge.
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ExamplesExamples• In Poltergeist, the mother hires a team of
paranormal experts to retrieve her child from paranormal forces.
• They bring in a new expert, who formulates a plan to get her back.
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ExamplesExamples• In Little Miss Sunshine, Olive learns that
she has unexpectedly won a beauty contest.• Her mother assembles the family for
support and formulates a
plan to get them to
Redondo Beach.• Please pause the lecture
and watch the first clip
from Little Miss Sunshine. 7
SubplotsSubplots• Subplots are secondary that complement
and intensify the main story.• They may involve secondary characters, or
they may involve a secondary goal for the protagonist.
• Subplots make your story, stronger, more complex and more satisfying!
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““Integration”Integration”• You want to be sure your subplots are
fully integrated into the main plot.– They should resonate with the main plot– They should increase the conflict in the main
plot– They should be woven in early– If possible, they should reach their climactic
moment at the same time as the main plot– They should make sense with the
established story and characters
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ExampleExample• Main story: Marcus wants a puppy.• Subplot: Older sister is secretly pregnant
– He hides a stray dog– She sneaks out at night
– She’s always claiming she’s too sick to work at the family curio shop
– His grades are slipping
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ExampleExample– The stray has been taken to the pound– She goes into early labor
– She gives birth– The last day before the dog is to be put to
sleep goes by
– The sister comes home with the baby– The receptionist at the pound adopted the
stray. Gives the dog to Marcus.
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ExampleExample• In Little Miss Sunshine, Olive’s brother
Dwayne learns that he is colorblind.• He won’t be able to live his
dream of being a jet pilot.• Please pause the lecture
and watch the second
clip from Little Miss
Sunshine.
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Raise the StakesRaise the Stakes
• Remember, every scene should raise the stakes or give us more information about your characters (or both). Every one!
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Little Miss Sunshine (2006)Screenplay by Michael Arndt
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WritingWriting
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• Don’t post them yet, but write scenes that clarify what your protagonist plans to do and (in many cases) what your antagonist plans to do to stop your protagonist.
• Write scenes that show who will be helping each side.
• Develop your subplots. (Note: You may want to go back and plant the seeds for them earlier.)
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E-Board PostE-Board Post
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• Give supportive feedback to one of your fellow writers on their next 15 pages.