This I Believe

Tell a story: ◦ Be specific. ◦ Ground it in the events of your life. ◦ Consider moments when belief was formed or tested or changed. ◦ Think of your own experience, work, and family, and tell of the

things you know that no one else does. ◦ Your story need not be heart-warming or gut-wrenching—it can

even be funny—but it should be real. Be brief:

◦ Your statement should be between 450 and 600 words. That’s about two to three minutes when read aloud at your natural pace.

Name your belief: ◦ If you can’t name it in a sentence or two, your essay might not be

about belief. ◦ Rather than writing a list, consider focusing on one core belief,

because three minutes is a very short time.

The essay

Be positive: ◦ Tell us what you do believe, not what you don’t

believe. ◦ Avoid speaking in the editorial “we.” ◦ Make your essay about you; speak in the first person.

Be personal: ◦ Write in words and phrases that are comfortable for

you to speak. ◦ We recommend you read your essay aloud to

yourself several times, and each time edit it and simplify it until you find the words, tone, and story that truly echo your belief and the way you speak.

The essay

Anecdote:◦ Tell a story. Relate your belief to a specific event in

your life that helped you realize what you believe and/or how you can apply your belief to your own life.

Analogy/Metaphor:◦ Make a comparison. Compare your belief to

something that you are passionate about. Relate the two and show how your passion helps your belief exist in your daily life.

General Thoughts:◦ Tie your belief to multiple aspects of your life. Show

how it weaves itself throughout the way you live and think on a daily basis.

Getting Started

Edward R. Murrow hosted “This I Believe” from 1951 to 1955. The newsman gained acclaimed for his CBS Radio broadcasts from London during World War II.

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History

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Famous People

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