Post on 02-May-2018
Today’s Activities
1. Warm-up
2. Pre-write for Night essay
3. Find relevant evidence
4. Due at the end of the period: pre-write
5. Thesis/Topic sentences checked
6. Library work time
7. Homework: Permission form for Schindler’s List
Warm-up
What makes solid evidence for an
essay? Provide at least 3 ideas
Please have pre-write form out as you
work on your warm-up.
Keys to relevant evidence
Quotes or specific paraphrases
Cite all evidence with page #
Literary analysis folks (more quotes than
paraphrases)
Keys to relevant evidence
Quotes or specific paraphrases
Cite all evidence with page #
Literary analysis folks (more quotes than
paraphrases)
Keys to evidence by topic
Cause/effect
1 detail to show “before”
1 detail to show “after”
Compare/contrast
1 detail about Elie and his father
1 detail about similar or different relationship
Literary analysis
Break down evidence in to specific chunks to analyze in depth
Persuasive
2 details at least for each paragraph argument
Pre-write phases
1. Have thesis and topic sentences approved
2. Identify relevant evidence
3. Work on analysis
Cause and effect: How do his experiences in the camps affect Elie Wiesel?
Loss of faith
Loss of will
Loss of bond with father
Loss of innocence
More self-reliant
Emotionally numb
Cause/Effect Thesis
The experiences in the camps caused Elie
Wiesel to ______________,
_____________, and _______________.
Thesis/topic sentences-cause/effect
Lady Macbeth’s ambition in Macbeth lead
her to reject her feminine side, manipulate
her husband, and finally lose her sanity.
Compare/Contrast
Elie and his father Other father/son relationships
• Sons betray or
leave fathers
(Elie feels like
he betrays
father, Rabbi
Eliahou’s son
leaves him)
• See fathers
beaten
• Rely on each
other for
survival
• Don’t leave
• Never
abuses
father
• Share food
• Help one
another
survive
• Sons leave fathers
behind (Rabbi
Eliahou’s son on
march)
• Sons beat fathers
(pipel who beats his
father for not making
his bunk, boy who
attacks his father for
bread)
• Broken relationships
hurts survival
Thesis format
Essay organized around points: Similar to other father
and son relationships in Night, Elie and his father
__________ and _________; however, unlike the other
relationships _______________________.
Essary organized around relationships: Elie’s
relationship in Night is similar to _______________, but
different than _______________ and _____________.
Writing thesis statement for theme essay
Through the characters of Macbeth, Lady Macbeth, and
Malcolm demonstrates the damaging consequences of
abusing power in Macbeth .
Through the powerful imagery of the blood and washing
of hands, Macbeth cautions that ambition left unchecked
by morals leads to downfall.
Topic Sentences-theme
Thesis: Macbeth shows how abusing power has
negative consequences through the characters of Lady
Macbeth, Macbeth, and Malcolm
Not proficient topic sentence: Macbeth abused his
power.
Proficient: Macbeth’s downfall demonstrates the
negative consequences of his abuse of power.
No argument?
Not proficient: Loss is shown in Night through
the loss of innocence, relationships, and faith.
Revised: The idea that the concentration
camps brought about far more than a loss of life
emerges as a dominant theme in Night through
Wiesel’s loss of innocence, the severing of
father/son relationships in the camps, and the
prisoners’ loss of faith.
Night’s use of the imagery of the hanging
pipel, Juliek’s violin, and the boy killing his
father over a piece of bread show how the
concentrations camps had the power to
destroy innocence and beauty.
Night shows that will power is essential for
survival in the Holocaust through the
characterizations of Moshe, Elie’s father,
and Elie himself.
Persuasive Essay Ideas
Fit literary traits in what ways?
Crosses threshold in to
new world
Faces challenges and
trials
Has and losses mentor
Descent in to darkness
Heroic feats of survival
Realization/epiphany
Return and contribution to
society
Doesn’t fit traits in what ways?
No realization/epiphany
No heroic feats, only
individual survival
No emergence out of
descent in to darkness