Post on 16-Dec-2015
What is a run-on sentence?
A run-on sentence is when two independent clauses are joined without the proper punctuation.
There are two kinds of run-ons:
• Fused sentences are run-on sentences where two independent clauses are joined in one sentence without any punctuation (except the period).
• Comma splices are run-ons where there is a comma separating the two independent clauses.
Why do run-ons happen?
• Usually a run-on occurs because the writer intuitively knows the two ideas belong together.
• Often the second independent clause comments on the idea in the first clause.
Because run-ons aren’t written properly, the reader can’t
recognize where one complete thought begins and one ends.
Here are two easy ways to spot run-ons.
• Use the “I realize” method for testing whether or not each section of your sentence is a fragment or a complete sentence/independent clause.
• If you suspect a sentence might be a run-on, try placing an “imaginary period” between the sections. If this works, then your sentence is a run-on.
There are four ways to fix them.
• One of the easiest ways to fix a run-on sentence is to turn it into two individual sentences. (It already is two complete sentences or independent clauses, so all it really needs is a period and a capital letter!)
• A second way to fix a run-on sentence is to combine the two independent clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction.
• A third way to fix a run-on sentence is by placing a semicolon between the two independent clauses to properly combine them in one sentence.
• A fourth way to correct a run-on sentence is by turning one of the independent clauses into a dependent clause.
The rain was loud the sky was dark.
Is this a run-on?If so, what kind is it?
The rain was loud the sky was dark.
This is an example of a fused sentence.
The rain was loud, the sky was dark.
What kind of run-on is this?
The rain was loud, the sky was dark.
This is an example of a comma splice.
The rain was loud. The sky was dark.
Here the run-on was fixed by turning it into two separate sentences.
The rain was loud, and the sky was dark.
Here the run-on was fixed by adding a comma and the coordinating
conjunction “and” between the two independent clauses.
The rain was loud; the sky was dark.
Here the run-on was fixed by inserting a semicolon between the
two independent clauses.
When the sky was dark, the rain was loud.
Here the run-on was fixed by turning one of the independent clauses into a
dependent clause by using the subordinating conjunction “when.”
What else matters?
• When you are choosing which of the four methods you want to use to fix a run-on sentence you’ve discovered in your work, be sure to always take the time to consider the meaning and the emphasis you place with each correcting option.