1) *unclear pronoun

2) *spelling (2x)

*spelling

1) *incorr. word

*run-on

2) *incorr. verb

tense

1) *faulty logic

*subj.-verb agree.

2) *incorr. pron.

*spelling

1) *punctuation

*punct. (2x)

2) *combine sent.

*subj.-verb agree.

1) *parallel struct.

*unclear pron.

2) *incorr. comp.

*wordy