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Item 1feudalism a social system based on loyalty and land tenure

CorrectedFeudalism was a social system based on loyalty and land tenure.

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Item 2Women in medieval society was always subservient to men irregardless of whether or not they was marryed.

CorrectedWomen in medieval society were always subservient to men regardless of whether or not they were married.

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Item 3ballads sung in the Appalachian mountains were discoverred by researchers to be markedly similar to many british ballads

CorrectedBallads sung in the Appalachian Mountains were discovered by researchers to be markedly similar to many British ballads.

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Item 4For example the Appalachian Ballad John Randolph is very much like the scottish ballad Lord Randall.

CorrectedFor example, the Appalachian ballad “John Randolph” is very much like the Scottish ballad “Lord Randall.”

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Item 5Everyone accept Heather have all ready read the ballad Get Up And Bar The Door.

CorrectedEveryone except Heather has already read the ballad “Get Up and Bar the Door.”

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Item 6Being as the armor was so heavy and had so many peices a knight could not dress himself for battle his servants had to help him.

CorrectedBecause the armor was so heavy and had so many pieces, a knight could not dress himself for battle; his servants had to help him.

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Item 7The wieght of some suits of armor exceded one hundred pounds

CorrectedThe weight of some suits of armor exceeded one hundred pounds.

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Item 8Wouldnt that kind of a burden make it more harder for the medieval knight to fight in battle.

CorrectedWouldn’t that kind of burden make it harder for the medieval knight to fight in battle? [a deleted; more deleted]

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Item 9Geoffrey chaucer he was a government official whom served under three kings

CorrectedGeoffrey Chaucer was a government official who served under three kings. [he deleted]

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Item 10the greatness of The Canterbury Tales lays largly in Chaucers skillfully use of language

CorrectedThe greatness of The Canterbury Tales lies largely in Chaucer’s skillful use of language.

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Item 11Beside The Canterbury Tales what other works of literature use a framing device.

CorrectedBesides The Canterbury Tales, what other works of literature use a framing device?

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Item 12scholars beleive Chaucer might of been influenced by the writeing of Giovanni Boccaccio.

CorrectedScholars believe Chaucer might have been influenced by the writing of Giovanni Boccaccio.

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Item 13Do you think that people with the Pardoners ethics and tricks still exist today queryed cheryl.

Corrected“Do you think that people with the Pardoner’s ethics and tricks still exist today?” queried Cheryl.

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Item 14The two knights Sir Lucas and him tryed to lift the king which is wounded bad.

CorrectedThe two knights, Sir Lucas and he, tried to lift the king, who was wounded badly.

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Item 15Initialy sir bedivere does not do like king arthur commands.

CorrectedInitially Sir Bedivere does not do as King Arthur commands.