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EDITING KEY: Personal Narrative Daily Paragraph Editing
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My Favorite MusicI started listening to popular music when I
11 years old My dad's morn Grandma delia7 © 7 A E A
bought me a boombox for my birthdav I never really
bothered to think about music before but once I gotA
a boomjpox, I started to think about music a lotw listening ®
after about a month of iissening to a different radio
station every dav I decided that I like listening toA
pop. country rap and the blues I have a favorite bandAAA ©
or singer for each type of music©
MONDAY WEEK 13
my favorite pop band is called Three Owls. I
like their song "Hoot Hootv because its about a bunch
of kids who like to stay up late, my favorite country
music band The spurs, has a hit song called At DawnA =
that is #3 on the music charts As far as blues songs
govSone Fishing" is my absolute favorite, mom bad andA ^y = A A
grandma delia like it, too. If CDs didnt cost so muck= = copy Awe could each have our own copio for now, the four
have ®=of us -has- to share
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TUESDAY WEEK 13
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60 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.
EDITING KEY: Personal Narrative Daily Paragraph Editing
i am the only one in my family who likes rap
music grandma delia Mom and dad think rap musicsounds®11 = A A =
sound like a lot of yelling. I like the way rap songs
talk about life For example, Can't Wake Up; a song© A
by flip Dillies is about a kid who never makes it to= A jy JL
school on time I also like almost Grown; his song0 V
about a teenager who cant wait to grow up. jast week,
I spent two weeks' worth of allowance to buy thehottest
+• new CD by biq Winnie^ the famous rap artist= A ©
WEDNESDAY WEEK 13
next week is my 13th birthdav I made a list of
my favorite bands and singers so my family can buy
me more CDs our good friend Ramon, who lives next
door, drove me down to Music city so I could make= were
sure they had the CDs on my list most of them -was-© =
in stock but a couple were sold out this year, momA ©Eysaid she thinks Im ready for headphones Grandma
laughed and said she was just getting used to rap
music, grandma rocksl
THURSDAY WEEK 13
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Capitalization 7
Language Usage 1
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Comma 1
Period 5
62 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004by Evan-Moor Corp.