MUSIC MAGAZINE

My First and Final drafts after teacher feedback

This is my originalPhoto above and My edited photoUnderneath which I Have cropped and Lightened and adaptedThe colour.

This is my original photo Above, as you can see ICut around the photo with A high feather and changed The lighting of the photo.

I have edited the lighting on thisAnd also added text to my pictureTo make my photo seem suited To a band.

Still image originals

This is my first draft of my front cover as you can see I have components of a music magazine.A mast head, large main image stretching across vertically and horizontally. I also have content indicators on my front cover. I also kept the same house style throughout with font and colours.This is my first draft and I improved it so it was the best it could be.

This is my first draft of my contentsPage, it was too simple and I didn’t Properly use the conventions of a Music magazine. My columns aren’t Clear enough so I redrafted it.

This is my first draft of my double page spread

This is my first draft, I realised that there were mistakes and improvements Could be done to make my music magazine double page spread as best as I could.

My teacher analysed my first drafts and gave me feedback on them. I edited my first drafts to make my front cover, contents page and double page spread as good as I could to reach my target grade.

This is my final draft, it is after editingI changed a variety of things, mainly My colour choice. This is done to theBest of my ability I think and I haveIncluded music magazine conventions.

This is my final contents page, it is Now all lined up neatly in columns andThe house style is shown throughout.With font, colour and genre.

This is my final draft of double page spread, it is no longer jumbled.