Flickr Feedback

Feedback from peers on my original Newspaper Advert

First draft of poster

Second draft of poster

Class Survey

I had a range of responses from my class questionnaire:

• I like the pun with the dart• Good editing of the photos• Where’s the information about the price and the

launch date?• Good theme throughout• I can’t really tell what the dart is stuck intoThe latter comment prompted me to ‘gatekeep’

and therefore I chose a different photo with a clearer view of the dartboard.

This is my final product