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Question 3

(Suggested time—40 minutes. This question counts for one-third of the total essay section score.)The following passage is from Rights ofMan, abook written by the pamphleteer Thomas Paine in 1791. Born inEngland Patnewas an inteUectual, arevolutionary, and asupporter of American independence from England. ReadfteWagecarellly. Then write an essay that examines the extent to which Paine's characterization of Americaholds true today. Use appropriate evidence to support your argument.

If there is acountry in the world, where concord, according to common calculation, would beleast expected, it is America. Made up, as it is, of people from different nations, accustomed todifferent forms and habits of government, speaking different languages, and more different mtheir modes of worship, it would appear that the union of such apeopie was u^practtcable; butby the simple operation of constructing government on the principles of society and the rightsof man every difficulty retires, and all the parts are brought into cordial unison. There, thepoor are not oppressed, the rich are not privileged.... Their taxes are few, because therrgovemment is just; and as there is nothing to render them wretched, there is nothing toengender riots andtumults.

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