Post on 23-Jul-2015
What I changed
in my third draft
I removed the red box with the
promotion as I thought it didn’t
make the magazine look professional
I changed the background photo because the three
girls looked to edited as bits of the top of
their hair were left out during the editing
process. In my third draft I just edited a
few minor things and placed the image in.
After I removed the red circle I changed the length of the faded rectangle and the font to stretch across the top like a skyline. By
doing this it made it easier to read and a lot more professional looking
which was my aim.
I moved the barcode and prices over to the left hand side of the page. I then moved the
symbols to the right except for the H Magazine logo, I made it bigger and placed
it beside the masthead and the issue number and date was placed at the top
beside the skyline. I think this was a smart move as it makes the front cover more eye-
catching.
I moved the cover line La Cricca across the
page facing diagonally to make it stand out more as it splashes
across the page. I then moved the smaller
cover-lines about and rotated some to make it
different and not too straight as it looks quite
boring like that.