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BTRIP TO DISNEYLAND
BOUGHTSOUVENIRS
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NICE HOTEL
When: Last SummerWho: My Family
What: Went on a trip to DisneylandWhy: family wanted to go on a vacation
Rode RidesAte Unusual
FoodsBought
Souvenirs
RESTATE ALL THREE DETAILS.
Roller Coaster
Space Mountain
Log Rides
Chicken on a stick
Spicy
Tangy
Mickey Mouse Ears
T-shirt
Key chain
First Then Next
Finally
Last summer my family took a trip to
Disneyland. First, we rode on rides. My faverite ride was
the roller coaster called Space mountain. Another one of
my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. Next, we ate
some unusual food. I ate chicken on a stick. It tasted
spicey and tangy. Later on that day, we bought
souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse, a t-shirt with Snow
white, and I also bought some key chains. Finally, our
family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding
all the rides, eating tasty food and buying souvunirs.
This is one vacation I will never forget.
Last summer my family took a trip to
Disneyland. First, we rode on rides. My faverite ride was
the roller coaster called Space mountain. Another one of
my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. Next, we ate
some unusual food. I ate chicken on a stick. It tasted
spicey and tangy. Later on that day, we bought
souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse, a t-shirt with Snow
white, and I also bought some key chains. Finally, our
family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding
all the rides, eating tasty food and buying souvunirs.
This is one vacation I will never forget.
My Trip to Disneyland
Last summer my family and I decided to take a trip to Disneyland, it was so much fun riding on rides, eating unusual foods and buying souvenirs.
First, we rode on rides. My favorite ride was the roller coaster called Space Mountain. I screamed the entire time I was on the ride. Another one of my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. I was so wet it looked like I had just got out of the shower.
Next, we ate some unusual food at a nice restaurant. I ate chicken on a stick it looked very yummy. It tasted spicy and tangy. My mouth felt like it was on fire.
Later that day we bought souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse ears for my sister, a t-shirt with Snow White for myself, and I also bought some key chains for my friends. I can’t wait to see their face when I give them these cool sourvenirs.
Finally, our family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding all the cool rides, eating tasty food and buying great souvenirs. This is one vacation I will never forget.